How to add extra detail.
Detail is when you add extra detail because you want the readers to know why the did it e.g "Chloe put her coat on because it was extremely cold outside in the park."
Extra detail is added to explain what your talking about. Explain is where you say about what happened informantly. Read the sentence below and I spot where the extra detail and put it into one big sentence.
klara went to the park. it was sunny.
The much better sentence would be "Klara went to the park down the street and it was absolutely scorching weather with contented Kids playing everywhere.
In that sentence there was Extra detail, WOW Words, Speech Marks and capital letters for names of characters. When you read stories e.g Goldie locks and the three Bears, have extra detail for the readers to know that she did not have any old porridge she had the babies porridge. Stories like Jacqueline Wilson has WOW words to uplevel theire story. First the story book she wrote 'The Mum Minder' attracted me to read it because it had a great picture on the front and had a bold written title. This is what attracted me to the book. When your writing a report, a story or a news paper you need to add all the things that is on this blog and it will guaranty you you will have lots of reviews if it is published and soled.
Thanks for reading and hope you learnt lots BYE
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