Christmas poem.


Christmas time is a time to share,
With Christmas presents everywhere.
When Jesus came alive again,
And that's why we come together on this special day.


Jesus was born in the hay,
That's where he lay.
That's what makes the special day,
Called Christmas day.


Mary gave birth,
And later Jesus came back to Earth.
That was quite like re-birth,
Then he was back in heaven.



Thank you for reading the poem I just made up. NOTE: Some lines do NOT rhyme.

By Ellie

                                                            Ben & Jerry

Introduction; Once there was a Cat called Ben and a Mouse called Jerry. Find out what happens to them.........

Chapter 1: Ben is chasing mice as usual then on the 19 of February 2014 he met a mouse called Jerry. Ben caught a glimpse at Jerry and of course he chased Jerry down the old, rusty, black and white road. He done it exactly every day for Ffffffive years!! WOW, The local butcher got fed up with them smashing the window all the time!!!!!!

Chapter 2: Do you know who the cats owner is? Well its Posh Ethan who thinks he is perfect but perfect is the wrong word for it ! Ethan is old, but he is  a billionaire person who owns a fabulous mansion!!  Well where he lives is haunted!!! The poor old man did not known that his cat is chasing a poor little mouse.

Chapter 3: Once he found his house was haunted he left with a dash and then went with his annoying cat to live by the countryside. The countryside was freezing like ice cubes, and Ethan sighed" Brrrrrrrr its really cold, how do you feel my little pussy!'' Next Posh Ethan pulled out a pair of battered mittens, an old scarf, a stripy hat (woolly), 2 long stripy jumpers (which his wife made him), some mittens for the cat and a stripy cat hat. 

Chapter 4: Once the two cold men woke up they walked to the nearest shop to get some bread and milk!!! While being at the shop they saw a cat called Ben who's owner went to the country side then chucked Ben out a few days after he moved . They decided to adopt Ben so he had a new family . But Ben is now homeless and Jerry has a new family.

Hope you enjoyed our story
 By Ellie Sheldon , Holly Sheldon and Ethan House

How to add extra detail in sentences.

                                                                 How to add extra detail.

Detail is when you add extra detail because you want the readers to know why the did it e.g "Chloe put her coat on because it was extremely cold outside in the park."
Extra detail is added to explain what your talking about. Explain is where you say about what happened informantly.  Read the sentence below and I spot where the extra detail and put it into one big sentence.

klara went to the park. it was sunny.

The much better sentence would be "Klara went to the park down the street and it was absolutely scorching weather with contented Kids playing everywhere.

In that sentence there was Extra detail, WOW Words, Speech Marks and capital letters for names of characters. When you read stories e.g  Goldie locks and the three Bears, have extra detail for  the readers to know that she did not have any old porridge she had the babies porridge. Stories like Jacqueline Wilson has WOW words to uplevel theire story. First the story book she wrote 'The Mum Minder' attracted me to read it because it had a great picture on the front and had a bold written title. This is what attracted me to the book. When your writing a report, a story or a news paper you need to add all the things that is on this blog and it will guaranty you you will have lots of reviews if it is published and soled.

Thanks for reading and hope you learnt lots BYE
xxx